My English progress from 2008-2010
I am very happy to end a period of my life. Now, I am going to compare my first written document and my last composition.
The presentation presents a little change. Perhaps, now I don’t abuse of the pictures on the posts because I don’t need disguise my writing. The content, at difference of the presentation suffer a big change. Currently, I am very worried about it. Maybe, because I learnt a lot of ways to realize a good structure that help me a lot to organize my ideas. The vocabulary, as is normal, I learnt a lot of words on these two years. Because of that, I achieve to improve the posts.
If I have to emphasize any point of my progress, I think that I get over a bit my nervous. It is reflected on my last oral presentation. It is true that I was nervous too, but I realize a good work. I remembered about all that I had to say, my gestures are more normal.
Perhaps, my pronunciation is the worst thing that I have. I am very conscious about it, and I will try to improve on the summer. But it is very difficult to me, because as you know, If my pronunciation on Catalan is bad, on English it couldn’t be very difference…
Obviously, I see a personal development in my blog. Perhaps, now the vocabulary that I use is more varied, and the ideas are more clears. But, I think that my best improvement is on the structure of the post. It is because on the class we were working it, and now I am very conscious that this is very important too.
My English Competence in 2010
Currently, I f I have to choose my best oral evidence to show my English level to apply for my university perhaps I choose the last one oral presentation that I did. But, I think that it couldn’t be a good thing for me, because me oral level is very bad…
But, If I have to choose my best written evidence, I’ll choose the BlackBerry post. I think that I select them because I tried to use a lot of specific vocabulary, because is a technologic machine, and the structure of the post is very clear.
Es mostren els missatges amb l'etiqueta de comentaris 3rd term. Mostrar tots els missatges
Es mostren els missatges amb l'etiqueta de comentaris 3rd term. Mostrar tots els missatges
dissabte, 21 de maig del 2011
Nuclear Power Station
Last week, 11th of March 2011 was a tsunami in the Eastern coast of Japan. This natural disaster produces a lot of deaths. Moreover, the area is completely destroyed and a lot of families had lost all their fortune. Although seems impossible, it isn’t the worst event that happen on there. There is a big consequence of the tsunami. The the nuclear power station of the area, Fukushima is damage. The reactor had risen its temperature. If it succes, It will be a lots of death as a consequence of the radiation.
The entire world is looking to Japan, and is supporting the country. I would like to emphasize the incredible japan behavior. I admire it because I believe that if the catastrophe passes on Spain, the people won’t respect anything. They perhaps would destroy all shops and would steal a lot of thing....
Finally, I want to say that we can’t predict this kind of events, but is very sad that on the 21st century the nuclear power stations aren’t safe about it.
My summer!
Summer is coming, and I want to enjoy it a lot. Because of that I would like to look for a job to have some money. But currently, it is very difficult look for a reasonable job. If I don’t have a job, I’ll learn English. Perhaps, I will go to England some time. I want to do it, because I know that idioms are very important, but too because I don’t like are all summer like a parasitic.
I know that in summer is for relaxation, but the last year, I didn’t work because I want to relax. But, I understood that there are time for all, and it is important earn some money. When I was all day on the beach, and go out every night I felt incomplete.
Because of that, my desire to summer, it is look for a job which allow me earn some money, but have some time to enjoy too.
Although, this summer will be more different than the others. I am 18 years old, and I can drive a car. Because of that, I will go to different places, not only for Empuriabrava and Roses. I would like to go some day to Platja d’Aro to spend all day on there, go to Lloret de Mar at night, and a lot of things. Perhaps, I will go with my friends on a camping some week, etc.
But, the most important. It is the last summer until I’ll go to University, because of that It will be legendary.
I know that in summer is for relaxation, but the last year, I didn’t work because I want to relax. But, I understood that there are time for all, and it is important earn some money. When I was all day on the beach, and go out every night I felt incomplete.
Because of that, my desire to summer, it is look for a job which allow me earn some money, but have some time to enjoy too.
Although, this summer will be more different than the others. I am 18 years old, and I can drive a car. Because of that, I will go to different places, not only for Empuriabrava and Roses. I would like to go some day to Platja d’Aro to spend all day on there, go to Lloret de Mar at night, and a lot of things. Perhaps, I will go with my friends on a camping some week, etc.
But, the most important. It is the last summer until I’ll go to University, because of that It will be legendary.
Menorca!! :)
“Menorca is one of the Balearic Islands located in the Mediterranean Sea belonging to Spain. It takes its name from being smaller than the nearby island of Majorca.”
But Menorca is my next destination too. When we will finish university entrance examination the students of high school diploma will go it. It will be the end of a long period of our life. Probably, some of us will choose different ways. I hope, a lot of them will be my friends for ever, bit I know that is very difficult. Only, with the most important friends I will have relation. It is the reality.
Because of that, Menorca will be a big memory of my infancy. We will go to apartments on Maó, one of the most important places of the Island. On there, we will enjoy a lot. Our idea consist on be all morning on the beach. When we’ll have very hot, we are going to refreshment stall to drink beer…On the evening, we would like to visit some places of the Island. Finally, we are going to the apartments to get dressed for the night.
Our planning not consists on go out every night to discos. On the contrary, our planning is like the famous commercial of Estrella Damm….
http://youtu.be/hhKpOz4SROE
I want to enjoy a lot of my friends, and end this period of my life to start a new with the best dreams….!
Los 40 Principales!
Los 40 Principales is a radio program. I like it to comment it because I am always listening his music. Usually they put pop music, and it is my favorite kind of music. At first, I started to listen the program when I was going at school at morning. But, currently I find on them a new form of pass the time. I could say that listen Los 40 Principales is my hobby. If I listen the radio program, I will be happy. Before, I spent my free time at computer, but I was very tired. Because of that, I decided to change a part of my computer’s time by a part of time to listening music. Actually, as I am on the bed when I listen the program I can rest.
Finally I would like to emphasize on a program of Los 40 Principales that broadcast at the morning called “ Buenos Dias Javi Nieves”, it is very enjoyable.
Tro!
Today, I'm going to talk about my dog whose name is Tro.
I met him when I was selling pine cernels in the street, in front of my house, with my brother and sister and some friends.
It was 8 years ago, so I was 8 years old.
We saw a girl who was coming to us, and we started to ask her if she wanted pine cernels, but she didn't come because of the dried food, but because she wanted to give us a dog. As it was normal, we accepted immediately but we had to convince our parents .
We didn't have any problems, and my parents agreed on a "test" night. Tro, the name which I gave to him didn't pass the test because he did willy in the living room, but we adopted him anyway.
Yesterday, Tro was 8 years old, and he has developed a lot, he doesn't run away, he goes out for do willy, he is obidient and the one form or another I think that he understands me.
All the family is happy with him :).
I met him when I was selling pine cernels in the street, in front of my house, with my brother and sister and some friends.
It was 8 years ago, so I was 8 years old.
We saw a girl who was coming to us, and we started to ask her if she wanted pine cernels, but she didn't come because of the dried food, but because she wanted to give us a dog. As it was normal, we accepted immediately but we had to convince our parents .
We didn't have any problems, and my parents agreed on a "test" night. Tro, the name which I gave to him didn't pass the test because he did willy in the living room, but we adopted him anyway.
Yesterday, Tro was 8 years old, and he has developed a lot, he doesn't run away, he goes out for do willy, he is obidient and the one form or another I think that he understands me.
All the family is happy with him :).
My football teams!
Well, I would like to talk about my football team “AE Roses”. I was playing in there since last year. At first, I don’t like it so much. Perhaps, because I was new on the team, or because my ex-team was fantastic. Currently, I can say that it is a fantastic team too, and my companions are excellent people. Today, I played my last football match with Roses. We won 8-1 and I am very happy because I scored three goals. But, I am a bit sad, because is the end. Moreover, I don’t know if I will play more to football.
The next year, I will go to study at Barcelona and is probably that I won’t have enough time to play it. Because of that I would like mention to the teams where I played. I started to play football on Esplais F.C when I was 8 years old. On there I live a lot of incredible things, but overcoat I met a lot of people that nowadays are my friends. Two years ago I went to play at Armentera F.C, perhaps the best season of my life. I played to football very well, but the most important was some people that I met. On there I learnt a culture of live. Finally, AE Roses, where I was playing this year…
My summer job :(
I am very sad, because I don’t have a job for this summer. Perhaps, it could be very usual on this period of crisis. But, I am not happy because I thought that I had a job.
Two month ago, approximately on March, I talked with the seaport’s director. He is a friend of my father and he said to me that I was taking on. But two weeks ago he rang to me…I didn’t have job. He told to me that the boss had decided that the staff was halved.
I am very sad, because currently it is very difficult to find a job but I am sympathetic and I can’t do anything. If I don’t find a job finally, I’ll learn English this summer. It is a shame because the conditions are perfect. I had a good wage and my timetable was: 8:00h-12:00h and 14:00h-18:00h and one day at week holiday. I could enjoy the afternoon on the beach and go out to drink something. Moreover I turned down a work a few days ago… it never rains but it pours.
Two month ago, approximately on March, I talked with the seaport’s director. He is a friend of my father and he said to me that I was taking on. But two weeks ago he rang to me…I didn’t have job. He told to me that the boss had decided that the staff was halved.
I am very sad, because currently it is very difficult to find a job but I am sympathetic and I can’t do anything. If I don’t find a job finally, I’ll learn English this summer. It is a shame because the conditions are perfect. I had a good wage and my timetable was: 8:00h-12:00h and 14:00h-18:00h and one day at week holiday. I could enjoy the afternoon on the beach and go out to drink something. Moreover I turned down a work a few days ago… it never rains but it pours.
divendres, 6 de maig del 2011
Dialogue
- Good Morning Paul, How are you?
-Hello, very well thanks, and how are you?
-Ohhh Paul I 'm very sad.
-Really? Why?
-As you know, on the period that we are is very difficult to life good. But with my wage, I can't pay my factures.
- Currently, my good friend it's a world'crisis where everybody is very worried.
- I know but, as you know, I'm a shepherd, and the problem become since severals years ago when the industrialitzation started.
- I think that you are a .......a.....strong men, and you'll go on. But perhaps, you'll have to realize some changes.
-Remember, that I was working all my life with bees, and I don't know anything more...
-It's not important, you'll have to puss and fulfill your focus. Then your life improve.
- You are right, thank you very much!
-Hello, very well thanks, and how are you?
-Ohhh Paul I 'm very sad.
-Really? Why?
-As you know, on the period that we are is very difficult to life good. But with my wage, I can't pay my factures.
- Currently, my good friend it's a world'crisis where everybody is very worried.
- I know but, as you know, I'm a shepherd, and the problem become since severals years ago when the industrialitzation started.
- I think that you are a .......a.....strong men, and you'll go on. But perhaps, you'll have to realize some changes.
-Remember, that I was working all my life with bees, and I don't know anything more...
-It's not important, you'll have to puss and fulfill your focus. Then your life improve.
- You are right, thank you very much!
dissabte, 23 d’abril del 2011
EASTER!
Easter is a religious celebration which commemorate the death and the resurrection of Jesucrist. Every year the dates of the celebration change. This year is on the end of April. We, the catalan students are on holidays since 16th to 25th of April.
I believe in God, but I don't realize religious activities, because of that I make the most of my holidays to enjoy at maxium and try to have a rest a littel before the end of the course. But, I will have to organized very well my valued time, because it seems that the teachers of my school don't know that we have social life..
First of all, Saturday 16th of April I will celebrate my birthday with my friends, but after the party I 'll try to finish all my homework by wednesday. Then I will read during the week three books: Decline and Fall, Mirall Trencat and Nietzsche. Finally, I hope that I could study by my next exams at weekend 23th.
I believe in God, but I don't realize religious activities, because of that I make the most of my holidays to enjoy at maxium and try to have a rest a littel before the end of the course. But, I will have to organized very well my valued time, because it seems that the teachers of my school don't know that we have social life..
First of all, Saturday 16th of April I will celebrate my birthday with my friends, but after the party I 'll try to finish all my homework by wednesday. Then I will read during the week three books: Decline and Fall, Mirall Trencat and Nietzsche. Finally, I hope that I could study by my next exams at weekend 23th.
Moreover, I play at football team, and this week I have to play two football matches, because I have one outstanding. As you can see, I have a lot of things to do, but I don't have enought time.
Because of that, my last solution is pray that everything turns out all right.
All we have to do is learn to cultivate the sun
The fossil fuels are resources not renewables. Some day, it will be dying out and we will have to look for some correct solution. If we think, we will find a solution. We need to use a renewable energy.
As everybody know, the sun is a perfect solution, because the energy that provide is very big. Because of that, all we have to do is learn to cultivate the sun. With them, we will live with energy until the Earth finished, because without sun, don't exist the life like we know...
The solution seems very easy, but there are a lot of complications. First of all, we have to invent a new form of store big quantity of solar energy, because nowadays is insufficient. Second, we have to call for everybody to try to realize a big change on our lives to get it. Because there are a lot of people who have a lot of interest against the topic.
Because of that, we'll have to start a new project on the area of education for instill to everybody this spirit of change. If we don't realize this big effort, we won't keep up our quality of life.
As everybody know, the sun is a perfect solution, because the energy that provide is very big. Because of that, all we have to do is learn to cultivate the sun. With them, we will live with energy until the Earth finished, because without sun, don't exist the life like we know...
The solution seems very easy, but there are a lot of complications. First of all, we have to invent a new form of store big quantity of solar energy, because nowadays is insufficient. Second, we have to call for everybody to try to realize a big change on our lives to get it. Because there are a lot of people who have a lot of interest against the topic.
Because of that, we'll have to start a new project on the area of education for instill to everybody this spirit of change. If we don't realize this big effort, we won't keep up our quality of life.
divendres, 15 d’abril del 2011
Formal letter
128 C7Requesens
Camany
17495
World Nuclear Association 12th April 2011
PO Box 958
USA
W1X 54K
Dear Mr Ritch
I am writing in order to explain some different point of view about the problem of nuclear power station on Japan. Moreover; I would like to offer to you some solution.
First of all, I think that everybody has to k now what really happens in there. Currently, nobody knows what kind of problem happens. Then we will decide a social-economic plan to achieve repair the nuclear power station. Second, it is very important to realize several medical test to all people who ask form it Finally, we will have to think about a solution to get that this kind of catastrophe do not happen again.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Javier Gorzona.
Camany
17495
World Nuclear Association 12th April 2011
PO Box 958
USA
W1X 54K
Dear Mr Ritch
I am writing in order to explain some different point of view about the problem of nuclear power station on Japan. Moreover; I would like to offer to you some solution.
First of all, I think that everybody has to k now what really happens in there. Currently, nobody knows what kind of problem happens. Then we will decide a social-economic plan to achieve repair the nuclear power station. Second, it is very important to realize several medical test to all people who ask form it Finally, we will have to think about a solution to get that this kind of catastrophe do not happen again.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Javier Gorzona.
divendres, 25 de març del 2011
Blackberry
“BlackBerry is a line of mobile e-mail and smartphone devices developed and designed by Canadian company Research In Motion since 1999. BlackBerry functions as a personal digital assistant with address book, calendar, memopad, and task list capabilities.” http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BlackBerry
Blackberry is very popular on the mobil’s phone because of his applications. But, I think that the best app is Blackberry Messenger, a multimedia chat which allow to talk with all blackberry’s propietor. Because, is a way to talk with your friends free.
A lot of people, think that BB is a kind of whim and is not indispensable. But I want to discuss this point of view:
First of all, on 21st century all of people have a mobilphone, and I think Why not a Blackberry? Because is better, or perhaps because is more handy than the others.
On other hand, BB at difference of everybody’s thought, this machine is more cheaper than other mobilphone with connection. Because, perhaps you have to pay some euro more because of internet, but thanks to BB Messenger your mobil bill is lower.
Afterwards, I would like to talk about the handling of BB. As you know, since few years ago, tactils phone become very famous. This aspect is one of the difference between BB, which is not tactil. Perhaps better, or worst.It depends of anybody. But I have to realize a recommendation: If your fingers are fat, you won't write well.
Blackberry is very popular on the mobil’s phone because of his applications. But, I think that the best app is Blackberry Messenger, a multimedia chat which allow to talk with all blackberry’s propietor. Because, is a way to talk with your friends free.
A lot of people, think that BB is a kind of whim and is not indispensable. But I want to discuss this point of view:
First of all, on 21st century all of people have a mobilphone, and I think Why not a Blackberry? Because is better, or perhaps because is more handy than the others.
On other hand, BB at difference of everybody’s thought, this machine is more cheaper than other mobilphone with connection. Because, perhaps you have to pay some euro more because of internet, but thanks to BB Messenger your mobil bill is lower.
Afterwards, I would like to talk about the handling of BB. As you know, since few years ago, tactils phone become very famous. This aspect is one of the difference between BB, which is not tactil. Perhaps better, or worst.It depends of anybody. But I have to realize a recommendation: If your fingers are fat, you won't write well.
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